Animation re-block

After being really pleased with my work from last week, and getting the best feedback I've had so far from other students, I've had a bad week since my mentor told me it needed a lot of work. Not that I doubt his advice - he's the one that does this for a living, he's the one that knows what he's talking about, but it's hard to hear you have to scrap something you thought was pretty good.

Anyway, eventually I did it, and I do think it's now better. Essentially his comments were that tan bishop needed toning down a lot because it was moving too much and cliche in some parts, and green bishop wasn't expressing his feelings enough (I certainly agreed with this part, last week it really was movement for the sake of movement).

This week I've redone it from scratch. Apart from fixing those things I mentioned, I wanted to get across a change in control in the relationship. Tan bishop starts off agressive in the clip, but then green bishop gets annoyed and takes control of the situation. With the new acting, I think I get across that change better, hopefully.

Let me know if you think this is better